hilda and the extinct huia story
my class and i have been making miny plays and the story was about hilda and the brooch. first we it this thing and so one was the mimer and then every other person got one two or three sentences then the teacher said some quiches and when you think it is about your sentes you stand up and you say your line. Then we started are miny plays about huias and hilda.
my class and i have been making miny plays and the story was about hilda and the brooch. first we it this thing and so one was the mimer and then every other person got one two or three sentences then the teacher said some quiches and when you think it is about your sentes you stand up and you say your line. Then we started are miny plays about huias and hilda.
Did the film communicate the script?
yes.
Did it communicate the rising emotion
being portrayed
yes kind of.
yes kind of.
What could you shoot differently?
when bella went on the walk and she went past the shop where i was hiding.
What would make your film more understandable?
Duke of york and add a little bit more about the the brooch and say some more faces.
What would make your film more understandable?
Duke of york and add a little bit more about the the brooch and say some more faces.
What would give your film more emotional impact?
sad music.
sad music.
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